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gypsylace
Junior Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 10
Prairieville,LA USA

0 posted 1999-07-03 12:55 PM


Enchanted moments by the sea
midst twilight sparkles on splashed waves
the moonlit darkness glows so warm
as cool nipped breeses blow our way

Feel the moment
isn't it great
that we can share
our love this way

Our laughter sings to the heights above
and our silent looks they speak of love

Make me dizzy with your kiss
embrace me now so strong and tight
not a moment do I want to miss
or enchanted memories
on this beautiful night.


© Copyright 1999 gypsylace - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-07-03 02:53 PM


Welcome to the family! I enjoyed your poem and absolutely love your UserName - why did you choose gypsylace? And another more important question - how do you find time to write with 8 children???? I do admire you for doing it!!!



ac
Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129
Cayey, PR - USA
2 posted 1999-07-03 07:10 PM


The type of love we could all embrace...if only there was enough of it to go around...sigh...

[This message has been edited by ac (edited 07-03-99).]

gypsylace
Junior Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 10
Prairieville,LA USA
3 posted 1999-07-04 02:53 AM


Thanks Poet deVine! My user name gypsylace has a lot to do with the fact that growing up I always thought gypsies were so interesting, a light hearted and happy people knowing no boundries as everywhere they rested was truley their home. The lace half of the name is simply my feminine side speaking. As for the 8 kids part, (AAAHHHHH)!! no really it can be pretty fun and insane which makes for pretty interesting writing at the computor. My son also writes on the forum he's invertigo18.

Thanks ac for your comment, I know it seems that that kind of love is hard to find much less that much to spread around. But if you don't look for love and simply build a positive happy life for yourself and be honest true and loyal to those around you, well, love just tends to catch you completely off guard which is part of what makes it so fun!

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