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Open Poetry #1

Between Dawn And Dusk

Alain DeLaCendres
Member

since 1999-07-02

Posts 119
Ohio

0 posted 1999-07-02 02:33 AM

The dawn moon
and the dusk sun
Were our most valued treasures.
With the dawn moon
came all of our dreams,
we could make them
and live them as we pleased.
In came the dusk sun
when the long day
was finally done
as we welcomed all that would come.

But it was all the things
that found us
between the dawn moon
and the dusk sun
That would most color our imaginations
and all that we were.
It was the things
between the dawn moon
and the dusk sun
that would shape
What was gone
and what was to come.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-02 02:56 AM

Very imaginative piece. Darkness and Light balanced.

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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 1999-07-02 07:14 AM

Welcome to the family. As you may see, we are in the midst of a Freedom frenzy....for the Fourth of July, Freedom poems keep getting moved to the top of line....

I wanted though, to comment on your poem and to welcome you to our group. I hope you enjoy your stay.

For some reason, this reminds me of the South.. old trees, moss covered... an old garden with fading roses...

Nice poem. I look forward to more!

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 1999-07-02 09:07 AM

The wording is almost magical, and feels like you've entered a new realm. Wonderful. Please submit many more.

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Sunshine

Words will always express our feelings true

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