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Newguy Junior Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 36Moultrie, GA, USA |
Lost A creature inside a changing time. Morphing, growing, dying, and being reborn. Where does it begin? Where does it end? In birth we die. In dying we are born. Looking, waiting, trying to find the answer. The answer to the question, that is, as we all are, lost. Commonly Missing People are and people do. Some people lie; some are true. But looking into the eyes of the crowd, I see that they all are good, are proud. But evil abounds, and those people submit To the grasp of immaturity; a bottomless pit. So now look at the world, it's days and its nights It's plauged with lies, drugs, and fights. So now answer the question I humbly propose Whats commonly missing, the heart or the knows? A dollar to the person who can figure out the last line, :-) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i like em . does it have tuh do with pinnocio i dunno |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Very nice.... I'd take a guess and say the last line refers to the heart and the mind. Correct? So, what's missing...I'd say a little of both. BTW......Welcome to the family Keith. Isn't this a wonderful place??!!!  [This message has been edited by Sally S. (edited 06-30-99).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you mean it aint bout pinnochio when he lies there grows his knows |
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Newguy Junior Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 36Moultrie, GA, USA |
Sally S almost hit the nail on the head!! It sybolizes that people don't use their knowledge and hearts to determine what they do. Congrats, SS! :-) |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Great work! |
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