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Insanity
Junior Member

since 1999-06-30

Posts 10
Mars, Mars, Mars

0 posted 1999-06-30 01:37 AM

My first post here was a response to Christina Myers "Birthday in Sedona"... reported to me by Nimrod the Hunter, I decided to join netpoets... and while writing my reply, My eyes were almost tearing, taking a trip down memory lane...

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Seven years gone by,
As I close my eyes,
and my mind flies back,
The first day I arrived,
Leo sitting on the fence,
Andee chatting on the meadow,
Welcoming me in with an open heart,
Five years later, I was striken with news,
And for the first time in ages,
And yet to happen again,
Tears streamed down my face,
For Leo and his wife to be,
The beautiful Andee,
Rammed to death by a driver drunken,
The day before I was to see them again,
In Sedona where the red rocks lie,
In Sedona where their spirits fly.
Seven years of memory do float by,

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*sniff*... Thanks for listening to my minds ramble down memory lane...

Nimrod the Hunter
Member

since 1999-06-10

Posts 60

1 posted 1999-06-30 02:11 AM

Welcome, my splendid friend! I like the poem, quite akin of your talent.

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*sniff* takes a walk another way down memory lane.

Moonlight
Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA

2 posted 1999-06-30 02:26 AM

I especially like the last 3 lines, Insanity. Very moving...very peaceful even.
~m~

Augchic711
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA

3 posted 1999-06-30 02:38 AM

Insanity~

From one poet to another you'll understand why my reply will be short and sweet and to the point ~~~ WOW!!! and THANKS!!! look forward to reading your next work.
Thanks for walking down memory lane with me too

*******Augchic711*******

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 1999-06-30 08:33 AM

A little Insanity around here is always welcome...

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Nan's Morsels
netpoets.net/nan/index.html

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 06-30-99).]

Insanity
Junior Member

since 1999-06-30

Posts 10
Mars, Mars, Mars

5 posted 1999-06-30 05:45 PM

Thanks you guys...
I like this place already, a big chance to open my heart ;-)

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Memories are precious,
Priceless, cannot be bought,
Yet they exist in abdundance,
Those we have and those yet to be found,
So abdundant, yet I value it,
more than Gold...

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Life is a struggle for humans to make more foolproof stuff, and for the universe to make more complete fools. I'm here, so the Universe won!

-*Insanity*-

Soleil
Member

since 1999-06-12

Posts 113

6 posted 1999-06-30 05:48 PM

good job, really liked those last three lines

ac
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 129
Cayey, PR - USA

7 posted 1999-06-30 05:56 PM

Welcome...hope to see more of your work now that you've decided to join the rest of the insanity that takes place around here...you are welcome addition...

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