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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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From the Archives: Oceanic sound Remands to me The wisdom of the deep. Resurgent pound A heark'ning sea In surfeit at its neap A mere abound Of privity Waves aphorisms leap. Reflections found Imploringly Beseech that I might reap My quests expound In verity ~ Percipience my Keep.  ------------------ Nan's Morsels netpoets.net/nan/index.html |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
At last. A poem with a porpoise! Nice job!! |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Perchance were you a lexicographer in a previous life? Seriously... what can you say except you are at a higher level than us mere mortals with your poetry... I enjoyed the poem very much... |
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IsabelleSkye Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253 |
absolutely beautifully written my sweet friend! As usual I stand in awe of the master of Roget's. Love.....one of yer biggest fans Izzy |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I love this..(hold on - dictionary in hand)..yes it was truly wonderful (furiously flipping pages)...Oh...I get it..I too am percipient! Liked it a lot, Nan. You always have just the right graphic also...do you use your homepage to link to them?  |
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one voice Junior Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 38Billings, MT USA |
(hey looky Nan! I figured it out! lol) and lol@Balladeer! Nan, this is a very beautiful poem. Got any hints you can give me to write as beautifully as you??? ~one voice~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
may i comment on the meter and rhyme...since i don know whut yer talkin about!!! love it |
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WhenDovesCry Junior Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 16California, USA |
amazing....it flows so beautifully....creates such a calm... |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Ahhh, thank you Nan. I love poems about the sea.  |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Beautiful and calming...wave after, after wave...perfect... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank you, thank you, my very dear friends... Balladeer - You're a dol-phi-n-ever criticizing me.... (two points fer me) Tim - Are you saying I have a case of that dreaded WordiNess??? Izzy - Watchout - Yer halo is falling off - I'll get the velcro... deVine - I always knew you were a participant... um.. percipient.... teamwork - yeah - that's it... one voice - good thing you're a poet and not a ventriloquist, eh? - wayoutwalt - Insanity reigns - Remember that... hehe... WhenDovesCry - Give 'em a tissue and a good poem.... Nice to have you here sea_of_okc - Me too... Sometimes I think I've written too many, and then another one just sort of happens... ac - Thanks - Turmoil and I don't get along well Thanks guys - I love you all...  |
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Newguy Junior Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 36Moultrie, GA, USA |
One word, Nan, WOW. |
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Nimrod the Hunter Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 60 |
Oh thank you Nan, you've just given me a ton of new words to look up in my pocket dictionary! |
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