Open Poetry #1 |
a scotsmans heart |
IsabelleSkye Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253 |
I am reposting this for a dear friend...... ~~~~~~~A Scotsman's Heart~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Gentle prince on foreign shore, stands steady like a soldier As he waits for loves true kiss His eyes have seen many a wonder as he traveled his homeland Hill, dale, meadow and glen Have all felt his longing gaze Yet alone he walks through silent land Destined it seems this way to live As bagpipes play a mournful note That echos through his soul Haunting refrain soothes his heart As it radiates through the mist Alone he stands in empty square With people bustling by their voices raised in cheer His eyes see not the crowd For his heart is but a lonely desert His soul a gaping wound He stands in hesitation, as something captures his gaze His clear blue glance focuses across the cobbled square As coppery sparkle fills his view Sunlight dancing on auburn hair Her laughter fills the air Turning as she feels his stare Her heart skips a beat, as he meets her eye Oblivious to time or space, his step fast and sure He pushes past the noisy crowd Eyes never leaving hers His eyes blue as a crisp autumn day Hers so warm and brown As she absorbs his gentle smile Seeing a depth neither has ever felt, expressed there in their gaze He stops Almost in awe As she smiles in nervous delight He knows this is the One Afraid to touch her or speak a word Afraid she'll fade away So fearful that she's just a dream That he'll miss his one chance The moment stretches as they both stare Of the world both so unaware This Scotsman's heart has found a home After many long years alone Speaking not a word (her breath caught in pause) As gently, slowly he lifts a hand Towards her lovely face Hesitant fingers tangle in shimmering hair As he revels in her feel His time wise eyes, so blue and sad Never wavering from hers A gentle smile crosses lonely lips As he folds her in loving grasp She smiles Knowing too, that this is what she was waiting for |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful! Love is so rare that when we find it, we should grab onto it with both hands and not let go. Swim the ocean if you must to have it! Fly to the moon, it you must to have it! Do not give up on it! Once it's gone, it's gone..... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Such a wonderful flavor to this work! I almost put on my kilt to read it again! A beautiful, expressive tale. Thank you. |
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Nimrod the Hunter Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 60 |
Wondrous poem, now if I could meet some people in Scotland maybe they'll like me in that way? My dad went to school in Scotland when he was a young boy. I love the tale you have passed on here. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Is this close, Izzy? I know he's a gorgeous hunk of man.... |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Although I've never stood among those rolling greens, I've looked through those same eyes to find my one true love. Thanks for the memory jog. This was very well done. Andrew |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
This poem reminds me of a time I held someone in an airport baggage reclaim area, gently stroked her hair back from her face and kissed her passionately, then looked in her eyes and said "I love you." |
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