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Open Poetry #1

The Deed's been done

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since 1999-06-12

Posts 6
Fayetteville, nc, usa

0 posted 1999-06-13 01:00 PM

The gauntlet's been thrown, the step's been made...casted and fired in Hell's domain.
The church's rebuke, the world's rejoice; Internal lament, regretful spite.
No path leads back, no innocence regained; Erotic bliss, religious disdain.
I do not know which to blame...natural lust or disapline spurned; fullfilling want, instruction ignored

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2000-06-25 08:06 PM

I liked the last line.

Elizabeth

I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!

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