Boys....or "Men" as they'd like to be called!

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Open Poetry #1

Boys....or "Men" as they'd like to be called!

JuLiEt
Junior Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 44
Abbotsford,British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 1999-06-29 09:37 AM

You know,
One thing that I've learned
Throughout my sixteen years,
Is to never argue with a boy,
They'll only bring you tears.

Disgusting little creatures
Makes you wonder why they are here
God must have put them on this earth
To bug us females I fear.

They try and treat you like a queen,
Well to us like a piece of dirt.
But all they want you to really do
Is wear a tiny skirt.

"Men" is what they like to be called,
Well I'll die a thousand and two,
Before I call my boy a man,
That's the day that we'll be through!

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~*JuLiEt*~

jfreak
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 306
Yuma, AZ, USA

1 posted 1999-06-29 12:27 PM

Juliet,

the problem my fair maiden is that your looking in all the wrong places for your Romeo. Not all guys are just boys. There are a lot of real men out there. Not ones that want you to wear a tiny skirt either. Some guys aren't interested in sex at all just what is in you, what makes you, YOU!!!
Just ask my girl, she will tell that such guys do exist. I promise you I am not the only one. Patience, it only takes patience and being very picky.

Great poem, rhyme scheme is outstanding and you got your point across very well. The second stanza is right to the point. Just remember we are not all like that. Your Romeo is out there and he will cherish you for....YOU!!

Jfreak

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

2 posted 1999-07-17 12:39 PM

the innate difference between the sexes is what keeps life interesting, in my eyes at least, viva la difference (or however you'd spell that in French)

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