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The Bed and Breakfast of My Dreams
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The Bed and Breakfast of My Dreams |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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The Bed and Breakfast of My Dreams Satin sheets with polka-dots neatly placed upon the king-sized bed. Plush peach carpet under feet leaving dents where I stand. Spiral Staircase up to balcony where Ian Anderson plays "Minstrel in the gallery" upon his flute. Couch of blue with velvet upholstery catches those who need a snooze. Fluffy orange tabby finds a lap, you wake to the sound of contentment. Mahogany table, and captains chairs delight the oriental rug below. The smell of apple-walnut muffins arouses the hunger of the guests. Into the kitchen they prance to savor the taste of delightful baking created by their hostess, at the bed and breakfast of my dreams. |
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Genea Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321USA |
i am probably the last person on earth who has NOT stayed in a B & B, but it's on my wish list. |
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Genea Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321USA |
i am probably the last person on earth who has NOT stayed in a B & B, but it's on my wish list. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Guess what, your not the last cause I have not made it to one yet either. |
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Deanna New Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 7WV, USA |
I love this one, if I put on a Jethro Tull CD and close my eyes. . . . |
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Christina Myers Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 159 |
what a lovely poem..and what a unique subject.. I am sure some B & B somewhere (perhaps in Maine?!) would be proud to display as their official poem! I've only been in one B &B before but believe me, it was a gorgeous time, I strongly suggest everyone spurlges at least once! -C |
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Krystal Member
since 1999-06-19
Posts 140Shelton,WA USA |
I really enjoyed reading this, unique and full of beautiful imagery... good going! ------------------ Shannon D. Montgomery ("Krystal") |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank-you for your nice comments, since this is somewhat new to me, it feels gratifying to know people like what I am writing. Thanks again All who responded. |
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