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Open Poetry #1

self pity

speare
Junior Member

since 1999-06-27

Posts 12
roanoke, texas, usa

0 posted 1999-06-28 03:51 AM

there's nothing left to write about.
i have no more inspiration.
my poetry is lacking words,
it loses something in the translation.
i cannot stick to my subject,
my mind, it wanders off.
the plot gets thickened and then it thins,
they always end in a scoff.
so, won't you read my poem?
i wrote it just for you.
the lights will dim, and then burn out,
such as my writing will do.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-06-28 06:06 AM

Well! That's one way past writer's block. :-)

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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.

sea_of_okc
Senior Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

2 posted 1999-06-28 10:02 AM

I know the feeling all too well. Keep on writing!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 1999-06-28 03:50 PM

I'm sure this was wit in limbo...cannot wait to see more of your postings.

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