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speare
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since 1999-06-27
Posts 12
roanoke, texas, usa

0 posted 1999-06-27 08:09 PM


today i made a choice,
tomorrow i will answer.
tonight i will prepare,
for my next disaster.
living in this world
i always get to choose.
right or wrong, it doesn't matter
either way i lose.
he doesn't see my tears
he doesn't feel my pain.
yesterday is gone
and yet it still remains.

© Copyright 1999 speare - All Rights Reserved
Craig
Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444

1 posted 1999-06-27 08:22 PM


This poem was good when I read it for the first time and got better every time after that.

Well done

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