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Lost Love |
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Susan C. New Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 3San Diego, Ca. U.S.A. |
Tell me how it feels To be in such control Unfortunately, It has always been this way. I was young and senseless I bet you never thought you'd see this day. The day I finally say, "Goodbye, Farewell, good riddens, it's time for me to leave..." Of course there will be things I miss We'll need our time to grieve. In our hearts we both know This can't continue on. The love has faded, trust is gone... This is why i've been so withdrawn. And so, let's keep this short but kind I would like to stay your friend. You'll always be a part of me-- Right to the bitter end. ------------------ Susan C. |
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Krystal Member
since 1999-06-19
Posts 140Shelton,WA USA |
You captured a part of so many relationships that are coming to an end... good going! ------------------ Shannon D. Montgomery ("Krystal") |
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Susan C. New Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 3San Diego, Ca. U.S.A. |
Thanx "Krystal". I gave it a try. I only write what I feel.  ------------------ Susan C. |
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Krystal Member
since 1999-06-19
Posts 140Shelton,WA USA |
I can relate, I do the same ... but I think you did an excellent job! Thanks for sharing it... ------------------ Shannon D. Montgomery ("Krystal") |
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