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MuseFaire Junior Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 12 |
It starts, slow at first building quietly in my heart until I open and find your face in radiance eyes connecting, flashing daybreak and I am lost- stumbling in the thought of you. I try to focus, to pay attention to detail but all I can hear is the beating of my heart all I can think of is your hand your arm your fingers brushing my skin and pulling me into your distance so that finally, my mind can stop thinking and know, for once and for all what it feels like to be close to you. -The Muse- ------------------ "Thought is the greatest of pleasures..." - Gustave Flaubert |
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Genea Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321USA |
Has a romantic feel to it. Nice. |
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Christina Myers Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 159 |
I enjoyed this one too, Muse. Very passionate and moving. And I can definitely relate. I love- :your fingers brushing my skin and pulling me into your distance: very very nice -Christina |
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Krystal Member
since 1999-06-19
Posts 140Shelton,WA USA |
I really liked this, and I too, can relate. Nicely done... beautiful ... ------------------ Shannon D. Montgomery ("Krystal") |
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MuseFaire Junior Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 12 |
well thank you everyone! I was nervous over posting but I see I was just being a ninny.  this is such a pleasant forum....I'm glad I found it!~ --the muse-- ------------------ "Thought is the greatest of pleasures..." - Gustave Flaubert |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
YOU'RE glad? We're estatic! What a romantic person you are. Wonderful! |
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