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Christina Myers Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 159 |
"Twinkle twinkle little star, how I wonder what you are. Up above the world so high, like a diamond in the sky. Twinkle twinkle little star, how I wonder what you are...." you are my falling star- my hint of something miraclous and as you blaze past me I catch a handful of your dust- bejeweled and sparkled- everything about you makes me shine so let me sing my song and wish a wish on you and we'll see...we'll see if it comes true- "Starlight, star bright, First star I see tonight, I wish I may, I wish I might, Have the wish I wish tonight." ------------------ And I thought: this is how poetry is born. It comes from invisible heights, it is secret and dark in its origins, solitary and fragrant, and like the river it will assimilate whatever falls in its current; it will seek a route between the mountains, and its crystalline song will ripple through the meadows."- Pablo Neruda |
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Christina Myers Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 159 |
I do apologize for the typos in the above posting.. my fingers got excited and I didn't spell check it- even the title! D'oh! -C |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Very good...you've given me a side to "Twinkle, Twinkle" that I just hadn't seen before... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Christina This is cute - and no need to apologize for bloopers around here - You can edit your postings - Just click on the "pencil" in the top-center of the screen on your post - It will allow you to edit your work instantly....  LOL - see? [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 06-26-99).] |
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Christina Myers Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 159 |
Thanks for the Tigger, Nan! I definitely needed that!!! He's my fave  .....I did figure out the editing bit, but it wouldn't let me fix the most blantant error- the title typo. Ah well... -C |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Twinkle twinkle you’re the star Not just because we say you are Up above Your words so high Clearly diamonds in the sky Nice one Christina and I like the title just fine. |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
great title!.........don't change it! love what you've done ------------------ Sharon Lee Rotondi (Enotneicna) [This message has been edited by Enotneicna (edited 06-27-99).] |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Were there typos? I was so busy enjoying I didn't even notice that there were any. Who cares when its good. Andrew |
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Nimrod the Hunter Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 60 |
I didn't have time to read this one, but now that you pointed it out to me, I feel very fortunate. This is one I should not miss out on, or any of yours particularly. You are a very gifted writer. By the way where did you get that quote from, at the bottom of your comments? |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I agree with all of the ebove. You ARE a star and you spread your twinkles generously. Thank you! Now, if I only had a Twinkie........... |
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Christina Myers Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 159 |
eheheh....*blush* now now...we ALL know the best part of twinkies is the cream filling! LOL I feel like I should be shuffling my feet and saying "aw shucks guys..." tee hee you guys rock! -Christina- melting in the arizona sun [This message has been edited by Christina Myers (edited 06-27-99).] |
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Kelly Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 145 |
Very clever. I like it. |
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