Open Poetry #1 |
Close Our Eyes |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
The way I use my tongue Then should I cut it out? If my ears were to hear What my eyes say about The things that I would do For You Could let me in your mind Share the insanity And in our perfect world Of all that cannot be We hope that it is true Even though we can see Where we are headed to On our way We will play And close our eyes We will live in ourselves Surrounded yet alone Take my hand I'll take yours And fall to the unknown The wind ever blowing Knowing Exactly where we're bound If we'd just think to care Heedless in the journey To stop and find out where We will end up going The truth was always there Ready for the showing On our way We will play And close our eyes Soon one day |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
whaddaya got - a factory there? Just take the word "wonderful" from me and attach it to every poems of yours because, by now, I'm sure they will be and I'll think so. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Another gem from the archives... ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
I'm glad this one was found back in the pack and brought back up..it's very good! You know, I'm going to have to take a whole day and dedicate it to searching back there!!!! (Now, you know....that's dedication!) Walt, I don't know if you'll like this or not, but...I could almost sing this. I know some poets don't like to hear that..but.....it's true. |
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leelew Member
since 1999-07-10
Posts 89highmount,ny,usa |
I loved it Walt! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Sorry I missed this one the first time through, walt. Another score. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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