Open Poetry #1 |
My Love Elisa |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Remembering Elisa I look up to the sky And see the stars have yet To decide if I will die Before the sun should set I look up to your eyes And see their steely gray As the fog rolls slowly by They steal my heart away And now the sky is clear I see the wondrous view Just to have it all right here The stars the sun and you For my wife |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
now I know why the initials of wayoutwalt is WOW! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks balladeer.. so i could write one for my wife glad you liked it. Hey this poem was for my wife would you like to read what I wrote for her years before I met her? If so look deep into this forum for a poem called Heaven's Touch...thanky thanky |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
your wife is a lucky lady indeed "wayoutwaltz" ------------------ one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart... |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
beautiful..your wife is a lucky woman. ------------------ ..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson *Krista Knutson* |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Darn, walt,you nailed this one too. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Very beautiful walt...I'm sure that your wife knows she is a lucky woman! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart." |
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