Open Poetry #1 |
the dream |
evolution Junior Member
since 1999-06-24
Posts 22ma, usa |
this night i always remember that night, it all started then one rogue kiss all my innocence gone our sweat blended in the heat of our passion your lips were sweet, like ecstasy when i tasted you, i tasted life wanting no more than you never enough of you your hair oh your hair i could hide in its scent it smelled like the dreams all the dreams id had of this moment the precursor this was it, life was in this moment the world melted away the dream all that was left, all that was real turning for you burning for you i love you i do |
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Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
Well Evolution you definitely have captured true love in your work here! Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece of work with me good luck with future work and hope to read more from you *******Augchic711******* |
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