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chris Junior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 29rowlett, texas, usa |
A world passed before my eyes can you tell me where i've been Dreamed of life so many times but i can't go home again years fly by feeling so much wasted time Walked away from the memories i was chasing my own dreams Put my faith in a fairy tale now my past can't be redeemed years fly by feeling so much wasted time hear my cries fly me away won't you take me to a brighter day come fly me away don't let this pain grow here inside of me set it free ------------------ does anybody know does anybody care what are the words we're attempting to share chris |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i like it yes the part about the fairy tale and not being able to make up for time wasted on a dream (like writing my poetry to make money hahahaa) |
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Krystal Member
since 1999-06-19
Posts 140Shelton,WA USA |
I liked it... it really makes you think about your own life, and how you've spent the time you've been given. Very good! ------------------ Shannon D. Montgomery ("Krystal") |
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fjones Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 98MS |
Yes life is short-- It's a Vopor |
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