Open Poetry #1 |
Emotion Potion |
invertigo18 Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 53Prairieville, LA., USA |
And only angels see What the mind bereaves. Taken on up The pain floats in the sky. Fallen to the ground. A tear falls from your eye. Balanced is what we are. Kept from floating away. By the gravity of our emotions Mixed inside as secret potions. On raven's wings we carry them wary That sometimes they may get scary. Wisdom is our only ally. Knowledge is our only insight. We focus on these to get through the day. Not listening to what our emotions say. Consistently angry. Persistently loved. Our conscience is weak. And all of the above. ------------------ Luke Cakalic |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
A wonderful play of words. I felt the poem moved well..(is that what they call well metered?) Anyway, thank you for sharing this. Nice work. |
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Joyfulltune Junior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 12 |
good job....i like your style. |
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