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The Hate Within
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The Hate Within |
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invertigo18 Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 53Prairieville, LA., USA |
Hate, hate your friends Pretend to love them Pretend you care. Pretend, when there's nothing there. Thorn in my side Will never subside The hate within For all the sin A coward A hero A liar A zero. What will come of this? When will it end? Wading in your piss Fake and pretend. The ocean of pain will consume you in vain. The ocean of pain will make you insane. Your way is wrong. My way is strong. For I am a hero. And you're nothing but a zero. Remember this And the hate within. Hate yourself Because you deserve it. ------------------ Luke Cakalic |
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Genea Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321USA |
invertigo, Not sure i understand this, but there is a lot of emotion in your writing. ~Genea |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Luke, I don't think you like that person very much.......and I agree. Strong poem. |
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invertigo18 Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 53Prairieville, LA., USA |
Thankyou. This poem is about a friend of mine that's no longer my friend...for certain reasons. And yes, I try to throw all of myself into what I write. Because if I didn't, then it wouldn't be truly sincere. Once again thankyou, and have a great day!  ------------------ Luke Cakalic |
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