Open Poetry #1 |
Despair |
Joyfulltune Junior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 12 |
Alone she sits in darkness A single tear falls to her chest Wouldn't it be grand for all If she'd just be laid to rest Oh let me be, I'm worthless Is her passionate cry I'm not worthy of their love Though I give, I give, I try. Her cloud of thoughts loom overhead And now she cannot see The sun behind those thunderous clouds That will come and set her free. Her days stretch into months Her months stretch into years The one that she holds dear to heart Cannot relieve her fears. A prayer is all I have to give To get through and make her see That when she thinks she’s all alone She’s got the Lord and me. |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Welcome joyfull! All of us at times feel undeserving... you have captured that feeling in this poem. I look forward to seeing more of your work. |
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Wintersurfer Junior Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 16 |
Thank you for these words...especially meaningful to me. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
() () () These are tears...I cried reading this. I understand! |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
I LIKE this Joyfulltune! I've read two of your postings now and both were excellent. Thanks for sharing them. sandman |
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