Open Poetry #1 |
......another small thought |
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( written by a mother who noticed her small son outside playing with a neighborhood boy ) "Was that boy black?", I asked my son, who was only three. "Gee, I don't know," the boy replied. "Next time I'll look and see." |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
2 small lines, but says a whole lot. Speaks abundant words! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
The innocence of a child, there could be nothing more special. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Incredible how two lines can be so powerful. ------------------ Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild |
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Denise
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Short and sweet and full of truth!! |
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Nan
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Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
How profound toddlers can be.... |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In brevity...truth. |
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Poet deVine
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Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
..out of the mouths of babes..! |
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Marsha
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Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
'Deer dear you do brevity better as well, that's it I'm hanging up my, I'll give it a whirl phrase. I know I don't like to put in effort, but hells bells kid, some hope wouldn't go amiss. Is there anything that you don't do well? Mmmmm Okay I suppose it's a stupid question, another excellent piece. love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Standing Ovation on this one m'friend... this is wonderful... just wished we were all as color blind as our children Tima |
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Balladeer
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Thank you, Tima...so do I. |
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