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Where, When , Why
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startin_fresh Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 137US |
Where, When, Why Where does a man go to cry When his pain is so deep When there's no room To stuff anything else Why can't a man hurt When relationships end Why can't a man be sad When it's all over Don't fall for your friend Cause when it comes to an end There's no going back to your Lost lover and lost friend. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
that last stanza amazes me. there's no unwritten law that says you can't remain friends because the love affair didn't work out. some people just don't know that, though, unfortunately. falling for a friend, probably the worst heartache there is. *sigh* |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Society has written some really stupid "gender rules" ... but it takes more of a man to break them than to follow them. Listen to your heart ... break rules if you have to ... it will never steer you wrong. Nice writing.  ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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