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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
behind the river watching water fall maybe the end of it all peaceful it lay despite all it gave what does life save but itself and leave the hollow embers that remain to wash away unlike your pain which will always stay ------------------ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Ouch-this one gets to me. I have felt this way, Jackal, you are not the only one! ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very deep. Pain can certainly run deep like a river (is that a song?) Pain never goes away, it's true. But over time it stings a little less. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Very well expressed in few words. It is difficult sometimes to engender images with brevity...but you have accomplished this for me.  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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