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The little black dress...
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The little black dress... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Lies on the bed soft and black shot through with silken thread black velvet brocade on the back I shower first taking care as usual my mind perusing the worst habit forming now a ritual first it's hot then it's cold pulsating water rains on me now warm to touch, soft to hold tingling, alive with energy Opium, the perfume lingers luxuriating in being female can smell it on my fingers I know it will leave a trail Now to the rest what to wear underneath? as my glance wanders to this dress silk stockings, they'll fit like a sheath slipping the dress over my head smoothing it down, fits like a glove pearls at my throat knotted down my back now my hair should it be down or up? reflected image likes up the best lastly the earrings and I slip on my shoes doorbell rings... he looks and swallows... I smile knowing his eyes will follow.... ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Perfection well written, he's a very lucky man. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Hee hee ... you go girl ... I liked this one. ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sigh... I wish I had a sensuous, seductive, sexy little black dress... Heavy sigh... I wish I had a body to wear a sensuous, seductive, sexy little black dress... RG's might fit my ankle. *S* Still heavier sigh... I wish I had someone to wear such a dress for, someone who'd remove it with his eyes before his fingers ever moved... and like the lack even better. Sigh, sigh, sigh.... Gee thanks, RG... *G* |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I'll lend you my dress anytime, as for the rest: when looking at a rainbow, dreams always come true, for there are no clouds only sunshine and that's my dream for you! HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Good poem, Rainbow Girl, and good luck with the guy! ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Talon Junior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 33Los Angeles |
Wow, impressive detail and very vivid. Sounds like you will do very well RainbowGirl. He must be quite the guy for such attention. Lovely.  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Vivid imagery! I could see that dress on your bed. Wonderful poem!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RainbowGirl, I can't see the dress on the bed but I can see you naked instead. hehehe Great job. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thanks....:-)) Seymour: Close your eyes, it's disconcerting being watched as I'm eating breakfast..*g* Hugs all ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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