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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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Walking with my best friend Promised forever true to the end We'd discuss psychic emanations Politics, Life and Religion As we were walking in field of wheat I felt windy kiss upon my cheek As I was fingering a leaf Pondering my disbelief Turn to my friend of longtime cheer Finding that she wasn't there Pax Christu Alicat |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice one, Ali....  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yeah, good one! What exactly happened to her? ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Well...I think the following will explain this poem a bit more: Two men will be in the field; one will be taken and the other left. Two women will be grinding with a hand mill; one will be taken and the other left. Therefore keep watch, because you do not know on what day your Lord will come. Matthew 24:40-42 NIV Alicat the banal persnikitty [This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 08-29-99).] |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Wow ... I never would have gotten that if you hadn't explained it ... what a hauntingly "normal" way to explain the rapture ... Nice work ... I am duly impressed. ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Good grief I didn't get that either, glad you explained that one Ali. I really enjoyed it even more on second read. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Wow...I had forgotten I had written this one. This was a few months prior to Spiritual being created. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well, I thought the title explained it quite aptly. I much enjoyed this, but I think...um,with the perspective that you have today... I would love to see what you would do with this, re-worked? (banal, me arse, too  )I could see this written as a three parter actually, if you explored pre-trib, mid-trib, and post-tribulation theory of Rapture....hmmm? *battin' eyelashes* (trying to tempt ya bro) laughing with hugs  enjoyed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Booting this back to the present again. and grin (wouldja believe it? twice I was early.) and yep, I'm looking forward to the trio, bro.  |
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