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As wonderful as you
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
if i was wonderful as you i wouldnt fear mirrors i would love my reflection i could walk down the road and never be told which way to go and if i was as great as you i could make a woman smile never live with denial laugh my troubles away maybe if i was special like you i would never play the fool follow all their rules but im not all the above and i cant bear my face live life as the disgrace so im wishing to be you special wonderful great you its never meant to be ill always be just me worthless forgotten me ------------------ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Some sad feelings here. Personally I don't think anyone is worthless nor forgotten. Sad subject here but well done! God has not forgotten you! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
You aren't worthless! No one is perfect, even the person this poem is written about. For all you know, the subject could be feeling the same way about themselves. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Nobody is worthless...each of us has something unique to give but it takes a unique person to recognise the gift that you give, that of yourself...they just haven't found you yet but they will! Tell me how you see you? HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
i see myself as completely nothing,subhuman ,very worthless ------------------ |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
oh,how sad Jackal. Just look at your talent for writing verse to see how very wrong you are about being worthless! ------------------ Shannon |
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