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Do Dreams Really Die?
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Do Dreams Really Die? |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Do Dreams Really Die? What is a dream, if not hope incarnate? It comes to us, again and again even when we cannot relate and all we wonder is if the pain, so real, will leave, and when. A dream scorned, ridiculed, beaten down underneath scowls or frightening frowns. What was my dream, do I even remember? It comes to me, again and again, even when I cannot relate and I wonder if the pain, so real, will leave, and when. Was it hope that brought forth my dreams? Will I ever believe in hope again? What was your dream, do you even remember? Does it ever come to you, again and again, even when you cannot relate and you wonder if the pain, so real, will leave, and when. Dare we? Dare you? Dare I? Dare we hope to learn, hope to try, hope to dream again? I will. 27 August, 1999 ©KRJ ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A wonderful job repetition in a poem is hard to do And you did it so well. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Dreams are the seeds of reality, nurture them with hope and love... if not, they will surly die and so will you. Such are my thoughts. A fine poem sunshine. Thanks for sharing and making me think. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Great work Sunshine. I can relate to this more than I'd like to admit right now. I'll share more with you later...check your e-mail for details. But thanks, I guess somewhere we all know hope is never completely gone. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. Marianne Williamson |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all for reading and commenting. ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
"Dare we hope to learn, hope to try, hope to dream again? I will." 27 August, 1999 I hope you remember this and act upon it. best to you, Latearrival |
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