Open Poetry #1 |
I am special |
fjones Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 98MS |
I am special-- With a place my own, In Pa Paw’s arms-- The safest place I have known. Only prefect child born. I have no flaws. I am sure of it; Because I am Pa Paw’s Anyone who don’t believe. Just listen to Pa Paw’s daughter While she tries to defend To punish is what she ought’er. |
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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
You are, indeed. And as usual, your wisdom has subtly reinforced a Universal Truth. If only all children could know unconditional love, there would be no self-esteem problems and the world could be a much more beautiful place. I think I have known very few poets who could say so much with so few words. You should post some of your really short ones, so everyone could see what I mean. Ron |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Wonderful, and beautifully written... |
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