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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-08-26 12:03 PM


to the sea lets dances lets sing
underneath the waves
hell shall bring
and we will be together
for slaughter does die here
youve given up on fear my love
say it aloud
where god walks
angels dare to follow
some say sympathy lies so hollow
but i got you
a little longer
to spend the time
pretend the worlds just fine
become one of them
natures friend
and let the fog ride right in
blind of me
we never ever truly see



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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 1999-08-26 12:08 PM


Jackal,
Good job I enjoyed the read

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-08-28 04:41 PM


nice work!
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