Open Poetry #1 |
My Inner Self |
Mona Lisa Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 100Halifax, Nova Scotia |
Who am I? Am I the pieces of a puzzle, which when complete, comes to fruition? Am I my thoughts my actions, my words? my intuitions? When the forces of evil capture me and hold me hostage in my thoughts am I then a victim? If I falter and deviate the norm, and heed unseeming urges do I suffer conviction? What debate then afronts the mind? to what do I owe the blame, of rampant thoughts askew, Of reckless mind meanderings, of worthless brainstorm with integrity long overdue? One true search of the mind would enlighten the quest and the honest truth uncover My inner self, is who I am hence the girth of the truth I discover |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I liked this one. Questions we have all asked at one time or another and put into a nice poetic verse. But some of us never solve that puzzle! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The puzzle is never complete, I think, except perhaps at the second of death. Your poem is very thought provoking...as a poem should be. |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
i believe we all parts of the puzzle missing. which we will never find. It's one of life's sweet mysteries. |
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