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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Antonietta …. Our souls met a long time ago We were destined to be together We were meant to glow!! In our Mother's Womb Together as we grew We had it all worked out… Me and You But suddenly I had a fright As you explained to me on this warm Autumn night I had to set you free No! No! Antonietta We have so much to give So much Love, Joy and Peace Together we Must live!! So Now… I find myself without you In this crazy, mixed up place If I could only see you And touch your heavenly face I know you are near And watching over me As you guide me in the right direction By whispering in my ear. I miss you Antonietta!! |
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pete New Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 1australia |
The poem was absolutley moving I loved it it has a lot of feeling |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I read this piece as if you have lost a twin. Is that the corrent interpretation. It was a sad, well-done piece, as was your intention. ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very moving indeed |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Petr, thank you so much |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Peter, thank you so much |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sunshine.....Yes My twin sister was still born. Thanks for you r lovely comment |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you hoot |
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Talon Junior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 33Los Angeles |
Sounds like you lost your soul-mate. Very nice poem though with nostalgic wistful longing. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
What a lovely poem...you are still together in spirit, I see. Very nice work with an unusual topic. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thanks Talon & Caroline for your lovely comments |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
DA, As you know I lost my twin as well, though I didn't know I had one until I was 26. My heart aches for him and now for you and Antonietta as well. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a sad, lovely poem. As there is a strong bond between twins, I am sure you have these feelings....excellent! I'm so glad you joined us DarK AngeL! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was a great poem! My sister went through the same thing. One of my nieces was also stillborn. I am sorry to hear that, but as it was put, you are always together in spirit. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you DE, My heart aches for you and your brother as well, and for Antonietta |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WhtDove..Thank you. I feel for your sister, as I'm sure I know how she must feel.And yes, we are togetherin Spirit  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you so much Poet, I'm so glad that I joined too.Thank yoou for your lovley comment |
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