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Summer (written by my 15 year old son.)
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Summer (written by my 15 year old son.) |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458
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Ah, summer We're finally there. The scent of love is Drifting through the air. A time for joy. Being with those you adore. A time for affection You never had before. A chance- to fulfill your desire. A chance- to feed the fire. Savor it while you can for when the summer is done it is time to say goodbye. So keep in touch because next summer it's a - time... chance... for love. beautiful huh? smiling proudly!!! (by mom) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderful poem! That about sums up summer all right! Is this his first poem? It's good..now you'll have to share time with him so he can post on the Teen Forum! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was good! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
take it easy, Ladies... he is as sweet and humble as they come, and you'll chase him away with your tigress ways. It would do him a world of good to come here and learn some of the trade. I think he has some potential, but he's pretty quiet. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I don't believe I have 'tigress' ways sir! But tell him, if he ever wants someone to talk to, he can contact Ryan, the moderator of the teen forum (thought I was going to suggest me?). |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
He has a great start there. I started writing young. Send my compliments to him and if he likes writing, get him into creative writing class. ------------------ *shadowy-one* |
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