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First Night (for her)
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First Night (for her) |
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Primus Nocti New Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 4 |
The sunset frames her mahogany hair. Mischief sparkles from eyes of azure blue. Her heady scent rides on crisp morning air. Milky white skin is touched by pastel hue. Tender care brushes the hair from her cheek. My eyes caress every swell of her breast. I was caught by her feminine mystique. Just a smile from her makes me feel blessed. Pouting lips part now ever so slightly. Her body displays God's most gentle curves. My aching soul longs to hold her tightly. I strive hard to be the man she deserves. Romancing this angel must be done right. Now and forever I am her First Night. ©1999 Primus Nocti ------------------ |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Breathtaking! Very, very romantic and the imagery is wonderful. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
*sigh*... this is beautiful, thanks Primus:-) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful! A lovely, loving poem. Welcome to the forum! I look forward to reading more of your work.  |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So very romantic....beautiful work. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A wonderful knight in shining amor. |
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Primus Nocti New Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 4 |
Thank you. |
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