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shattered heart

bleeding heart
New Member

since 1999-08-23

Posts 8
virginia minnesota USA

0 posted 1999-08-23 06:55 PM

with a cold heart
and a greiving soul
I wonder...
what went wrong
all I see is pettiness
from both of us
with all spite spent
and anger gone
all I have left
to remind me
of you
is a shattered
heart

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I lay here waiting with my bleeding heart.

wordweaver
Junior Member

since 1999-08-19

Posts 25
south carolina

1 posted 1999-08-23 08:49 PM

this is touching. welcome to the group.look forward to reading fture works of yours

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 1999-08-23 10:33 PM

This is heartbreaking. Almost like you wrote it with the blood of your bleeding heart! Welcome...you are among friends. Let us help you while you heal!

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-08-24 03:44 AM

I would gladly take your pain, to free you of this burden you bear. You may indeed take comfort here.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

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