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Open Poetry #1

Rage

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-08-23 11:22 AM

she had seen it before me
a rage
the rage
develop in me
where it came i never knew
but love it leave it
you could never do
alienate all that cared
made the planets revolve
so scared
now the crow is on my shoulder
pecking at my heart again
anger deep and me are one
now ive reached half the fun
nothing to lose
no ego to bruise
and the forest
the meadows
shall whisper of me
the fool who let rage consume him
for all eternity

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bleeding heart
New Member

since 1999-08-23

Posts 8
virginia minnesota USA

1 posted 1999-08-23 07:13 PM

A fellow poet who writes free verse. I am so glad that I am not alone. I am new here too.
Very well written. I can see your pain.

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I lay here waiting with my bleeding heart.

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