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Blondie
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since 1999-08-06
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0 posted 1999-08-21 09:46 PM


We've all been through alot
and you've always been right there,
noone could ever do as much
to show they really care.

From splinters and scraped knees
to boys and life's new start,
you've never given up on
a crying broken heart.

You took off my training wheels
and taught me how to ride,
You taught me nothing could get done
until I at least tried.

You watched me do back flips
and win prize after prize,
but nothing could compare to seeing
the pride in Mommy and Daddy's eyes.

You've given me everything I've ever needed
and it all came with some fun,
I even got a little brother
when I asked for one.

So when it comes down to it
any eyes could see,
that what I love most in the world
is my family.      

© Copyright 1999 Melissa - All Rights Reserved
Balladeer
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1 posted 1999-08-21 10:40 PM


Wonderful sentiments, Blondie. We should all be so blessed.
Blondie
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2 posted 1999-08-23 02:52 PM


Thank you very much balladeer, means a lot coming from you.
LngJhnAg
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3 posted 1999-08-23 03:28 PM


Hi ya, Blondie

You poem says a lot about your life.. a lot of happiness there. unless, of course, you were doing back flips off a flatbed truck at 60 mph. lol

Blondie
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4 posted 1999-08-23 08:11 PM


haha, I think you should write a poem about that, me doing back flips off of a truck...your hilarious.
Missy F
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5 posted 1999-08-24 09:32 PM


Great poem...shows you really enjoy and love your family what everyone should do.
Alwye
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6 posted 1999-08-24 09:58 PM


Beautifully done.....I too am blessed with a great family. Keep up the great work!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller



Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 1999-08-25 10:28 AM


Blondie,
I agree with Balladeer
Nice job.

RosePetal
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8 posted 2002-02-11 06:48 PM


good poem blondie! its important to appreciate your family
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