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Open Poetry #1

I Seek

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-08-21 10:31 AM

I Seek

I seek the rippled sands
the flush of the ocean
the sunlight upon my skin

I seek you and me together
walking hand in hand
journeying down the coastline
as the sun sets over land

I seek our gifted journey
deep within my heart
for I knew I truly loved you
right from the very start

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

1 posted 1999-08-21 10:39 AM

*sigh* Oh, I Love this poem! Short, sweet, and to the point! I seek this too...

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

2 posted 1999-08-21 11:06 AM

~onevoice~, I thank you very much for your kind reply. I am missing the beach this summer, so I think that's what brought this about. I almost went to visit friends at the beach this week, but the big bad bridge huffed, and puffed and blew me away.

Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

3 posted 1999-08-21 05:32 PM

Simple and sweet.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-08-21 07:15 PM

Direct and to the point, no need for wasted words

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 1999-08-21 10:48 PM

It's always a treat so see how much you can say in so few words.

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