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Open Poetry #1

my own special way

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

0 posted 1999-08-20 09:07 PM

I look at your picture,
I look at your face,
something now stands in it's place.

I remember the times,
you were happy and gay,
It seems all dull,
now that you are away.

It stragles me to think,
that I never got to say,
how much I love you,
in my own special way.

You were a person,
loved by all,
everyone tall and small.

I remember how we played,
in the garret all afternoon.
The way you talked the day away,
I'm going to have ta end this soon.

It hurts me to think,
that I never got a chance,
to say I love you,
this isn't just romance.

I love you!
Love you!

[This message has been edited by Sundance (edited 08-20-99).]

pusskatt
Junior Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 30
Austrralia

1 posted 1999-08-20 09:26 PM

very nice!

Emmy
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 194
KY

2 posted 1999-08-20 09:38 PM

One of your best. The change at the end really helped too. Smiles!

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

3 posted 1999-08-22 02:13 PM

thanks!

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

4 posted 1999-08-24 08:54 PM

Anyone else?

Seeking77
Junior Member

since 1999-07-09

Posts 24
Irvine california

5 posted 1999-08-25 03:51 AM

BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

6 posted 1999-08-27 01:00 PM

Thanks

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