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Sunset Love |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean 
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Everytime I see a sunset Gently setting across the sky I travel back in memories To another day gone by The colors of the sunset As I remember them that day Captured all my emotions When you looked at me that way As we sat together And you opened up your heart I knew that from that moment We'd never be apart You allowed me to see The tender side no one else knew And as the sunset faded I fell in love with you |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Nice poem... thanks for posting it... |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Really evocative. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
Welcome to the forums, Deb  ------------------ PS: have you been to "The Alley" lately and cast your vote for "on a roll"? |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice visual......  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I loved your poem and am looking forward to reading more from you!  |
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