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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

0 posted 1999-08-19 01:30 PM

Can't you put your arms around me,
And love me like you should?
For I thought I had a partner,
Like you, that understood.

Though I tell you what I'm feeling,
Somehow it goes unheard.
I tell you what I need,
You still say not a word.

For years you know I've been there,
Been stationed at your side.
As you move from job to job,
And swallowed not your pride.

I'm asking you to understand,
What I am going through.
A little bit of tenderness,
Is all I'm asking you.

To take a minute of your time,
And really hold me close.
I simply need to feel from you,
Your love in one small dose.

I don't think it's much to ask,
For all that we've been through.
For I have given all I can,
In understanding YOU!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 1999-08-19 01:42 PM

Sock it to 'em , Whitedove

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

2 posted 1999-08-19 03:25 PM

So recognisable, so readable, so relevant, so GOOD!

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 1999-08-19 03:28 PM

Sometimes, it needs to be said, WhtDove. We men aren't always that smart....and the way you say it is perfect.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 1999-08-19 04:18 PM

Thank you Sue! And Balladeer, that means a lot coming from you!
I know one was made to compliment the other, but sometimes it just don't work that way!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 1999-08-19 05:15 PM

Great poem... hope he listens! *S*

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 1999-08-19 09:38 PM

WhtDove,
a lovely poem,
I would put on a tape in subliminal form
and play in when he goes to sleep *L*

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

7 posted 1999-08-19 11:23 PM

Seymour you put a smile on my face. LOL
Ya' think it might work.

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