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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-08-19 10:41 AM


Falling

I'm falling
once again,
into this
great big pit
that chews me
into pieces.
Spewing
my remains
upon newly
seeded lawns,
to be fertilizer
beneath your feet.

© Copyright 1999 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 1999-08-19 11:27 AM


dont tell me you are a peice o dung no cuz i like poem and no poet is dung methinks
Lost Dreamer
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2 posted 1999-08-19 11:42 AM


wayoutwalt: Oh, my I see what your saying, and that never crossed my mind. Oh, Lord what did I write, LOL. This is just about helping someone who does not deserve to be helped, but I fall to his calling everytime he needs. Then he makes me feel like a fool, and walks all over me.
wayoutwalt
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3 posted 1999-08-19 11:48 AM


turn on your icq lemme in puleez
Lost Dreamer
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4 posted 1999-08-19 12:00 PM


wayoutwalt, I am not at home, I'm on a friends computer, so i don't have access to my ICQ. Sorry.
wayoutwalt
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5 posted 1999-08-19 12:02 PM


oh foolish me
Lost Dreamer
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6 posted 1999-08-19 12:16 PM


wayoutwalt, Tis no fool are you, for how were you to know, I am somewhere then where I belong. You could E-Mail me though, that I can do.
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