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My Heroine |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
This scarred heart has been broken once more. I doubt that I'll ever get used to it. Despite my hate truly her I adore. She owns me more than I like to admit. I doubt that I'll ever get used to it. She always seem to play me for a fool. She owns me more than I like to admit. The witch is my master and not my tool. She always seem to play me for a fool. She entices me then carves up my heart. The witch is my master and not my tool. I admit that I knew it from the start. She entices me then carves up my heart. The rush of her embrace floods through each vein. I admit that I knew it from the start. I hate her as she saves me from my pain. The rush of her embrace floods through each vein. My lover is also my heroine. I hate her as she saves me from my pain. You see now I'm a slave to heroin. My lover is also my heroine. Despite my hate truly her I adore. You see now I'm a slave to heroin. This scarred heart has been broken once more. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 08-19-99).] [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 08-19-99).] |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
This is toned down, the original is in Adult. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
This is powerful, Dream, though your posting in Adult is much more so. ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
I haven't seen the adult one yet, but I thought this was great. Let's celebrate the year of the pantoum! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DreamEvil, You have a propensity for sorrow And the non existant tomorrow. I know you can see heaven and hell. But I'm also sure someone some where, Will come and ring your bell. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
you are getting quite good with those pantoums  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
'Tis a pantoum day...... I see a lot of hours of work from you today, DE.... nice job.. |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
*hugs* Im speechless.. I dont know why.. hehe.. but I am.. but I want to reply ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
I like the way you say addiction then refer to being owned.Isn't that what addicts are? Well done,very deep meaning in this one.If one cares to look.Thank-You for making me think once again,brother! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thank Nan, she introduced me to pantoums and I LOVE the format!! |
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