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elvira
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since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

0 posted 1999-08-19 01:16 AM

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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-08-19 01:46 AM

Engrossing tale and appealing format, my dear.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

2 posted 1999-08-19 09:19 AM

It's always upsetting when we are faced with the raw cruelty of nature.
There are even people who can cry over an injured kitten and beat someone to death on the same day. Fortunately more people are like you - except at writing poetry, of course, in that you are better than most.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 1999-08-19 10:32 AM

Elvira,
Engrossing is the word and enjoyed the sad tale.

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

4 posted 1999-08-19 06:25 PM

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wordweaver
Junior Member

since 1999-08-19

Posts 25
south carolina

5 posted 1999-08-19 06:46 PM

sawthe entire thing as I read, realy well done.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 1999-08-19 07:44 PM

Great story well told!!!

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

7 posted 1999-08-20 12:52 PM

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Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

8 posted 1999-08-20 12:56 PM

This is great! I have a passion for lions - cats in general. (Loved the Lion King!)

moonmoon
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 277
TX , USA

9 posted 1999-08-20 01:19 AM

A good piece. Well done Elvira...The plight of the cubs, was captivating...I am glad you added that soothing touch to the end..The hope that they survived...

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

10 posted 1999-08-20 06:02 PM

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