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Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 1999-08-19 12:36 PM


Each year I write a letter, just to let you know,
how my life is going and that I miss you so.

And as the stack grows deeper with pictures, words and poems.
The words to say how much your missed, pics to show the kids have grown.

I know you’ll never see these things, no address for you there.
So I just smile and seal them up and send this little prayer.

Jesus please protect me, till I can meet again.
the woman I respect so much, my very bestest friend.
And if by chance you see her in the garden by the stream,
tell her that I love her and I’ll meet her in my dreams.

© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
DARILYN SUE
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since 1999-08-03
Posts 22
HOUSTON, TX
1 posted 1999-08-19 12:43 PM


I LIKE TO THINK THAT SHE SEES THE LETTERS, YOU, THE KIDS & ALL THE HAPPY MOMENTS IN HER DAUGHTERS LIFE. ANOTHER WONDERFUL POEM ABOUT YOUR MOTHER LUCIE.

elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
2 posted 1999-08-19 12:52 PM


touching, Lucie
poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
3 posted 1999-08-20 09:04 AM


What a beautiful little twist at the end! That was not what I was expecting!! Very nice piece here! I'm glad I took a peek at it!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


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4 posted 1999-08-20 10:49 AM


Lovely....
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