Open Poetry #1 |
Palindrome. |
Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
I apologise for this, I'm in an experimental mood at the moment. When you smile Sun breaks through the clouds That sail above in galleon style; Day's damp and misty shrouds That sail above in galleon style. Sun breaks through the clouds When you smile. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sue, Never apologize for experimentation. I liked it. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I liked it too..........If it weren't for experimentation...I wouldn't write nuthin?......Ummm...on second thought....that's not a great example.....Ummmm?...Keep experimenting dear, you do well at it...this is good! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is nice - I like it Palindromes are fun, aren't they? How about..... Sunshine breaking above shrouds above breaking Sunshine.. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I like it, Sue. Structure can indeed be fun. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Apologise for what exactly? It's great, very cyclic in idea as well as form, such a lovely choice of topic. |
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