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Open Poetry #1

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Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

0 posted 1999-08-18 02:55 PM

I apologise for this, I'm in an experimental mood at the moment.

When you smile
Sun breaks through the clouds
That sail above in galleon style;
Day's damp and misty shrouds
That sail above in galleon style.
Sun breaks through the clouds
When you smile.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 1999-08-18 03:13 PM

Sue,
Never apologize for experimentation. I liked it.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

2 posted 1999-08-18 03:23 PM

I liked it too..........If it weren't for experimentation...I wouldn't write nuthin?......Ummm...on second thought....that's not a great example.....Ummmm?...Keep experimenting dear, you do well at it...this is good!

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 1999-08-18 07:21 PM

This is nice - I like it
Palindromes are fun, aren't they?

How about.....
Sunshine breaking above shrouds above breaking Sunshine..

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 1999-08-18 07:28 PM

I like it, Sue. Structure can indeed be fun.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

5 posted 1999-08-19 12:49 PM

Apologise for what exactly? It's great, very cyclic in idea as well as form, such a lovely choice of topic.

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