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blueloon
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 161
NY

0 posted 1999-08-18 01:40 PM


A memory. The barn. "The Bed."
Hay within our hair.
Like an ice cube you melted within.
Brown tastles of hair ran through my fingers.
Will you ever feel the words I once spoke?

We ran from Shepards Hill.
It felt like a race between two evils.
My lungs burned with every breath I took.
I never thought of what you felt.

You ended my desire as salt water glistened
down my throat.
You held me close and kissed my pain away.
And as quickly as you came, you left.
Come back to me sweet angel, I need to know
what you felt.

© Copyright 1999 blueloon - All Rights Reserved
Sue
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 383
France
1 posted 1999-08-18 02:50 PM


I don't quite know why, but I like it.
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