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DarkChiild Junior Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 18 |
Betrayal ~~~~~~~~ It is the dying virtue a betrayal yet to come lost to me forever al hope has come undone an acronym for death the soul's last dying breath a name that's made to kill the name does haunt me still hence forth a word unspoken for a word that's said in vein the word forever broken a word of double blame for all I care for all I dare the word can sit and rust for all that's left unspoken there is no need for trust. ------------------ Wish in one hand, then defecate in the other and see which one fills up first. --DarkChiild-- |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I REALLY like the way you get so much power & punch out of the short lines of rhyme and meter!! As always with your work, very unique & deep emotion - very nice way to vent anger !! Keep writing ! ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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