Open Poetry #1 |
A Tear |
Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
A tear for every hurtful saying A tear or two for every name Another for each accusation Angry words of pain. A tear for all I do is wrong A second for all I can't do right Another, for the tone in your voice For this I cry tears all night. A tear for the night before A second for all the things you said Another because my eyes are sore Angry words you don't regret. |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
I read your poem because there were no replies, and i know when i write something i like feedback. I loved your poem, and i can relate to it. And relating to a poem is what makes it a good poem. Well done!!! carman |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
Thank you very much for reading it and posting, means a lot. |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
I don't think some people realize how hurt- ful words can be.It can be worse then them hitting you.I think it leaves a hole in your heart.I have something someone e-mailed about this subject.It's called the fence.If you would like to read it,you can e-mail and I will try to find it for you.I don't know if I saved it though.Well happy writing. |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
I can relate to this, too. Hurtful words can really wear you down. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
How is it that we tolerate such behaviors? Seems wrong in retrospect, doesn't it? |
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