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Missed_fantasy Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 16Mankato, MN, USA |
Crashing rhythm thumping in the dancing of the tide Feel the booming waves hit as the red fury subsides Sunset orange and hot the burning settles low Lava flows inside the veins as tempests raging blows The rainfall's cooling water serves to satisfy our thirst The raindrops fall forever helping in the new rebirth ------------------ Love always and blessed be my children |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
That was pretty gal......very much so. |
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lenny Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 63front royal, va. u.s.a. |
Very nice. You brought me through four moods with so few lines. Well done. "The rains of His mercy cannot gather on the mountaintops of pride, but flow easily into the valleys of humbleness."--Sri Yukteswar |
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